I don’t care what the plan is as long as we have one.
– Kevin Bacon in Tremors
I was teaching last weekend, another one of my patented how-to-use-film-techniques-to–craft-a-killer-novel in one impossible hour workshops, and I found myself focusing on a plot element that I haven’t spent all that much time talking about here, so I thought I’d blog about that today.
You always hear that “Drama is conflict”, but when you think about it – what the hell does that mean, practically?
It’s actually much more true, and specific, to say that drama is the constant clashing of a hero/ine’s PLAN and an antagonist’s, or several antagonist’s, PLANS.
(Oh, you thought this blog was going to be about life plans? Hah. Like I have a clue.)
In the first act of a story, the hero/ine is introduced, and that hero/ine either has or quickly develops a DESIRE. She might have a PROBLEM that needs to be solved, or someone or something she WANTS, or a bad situation that she needs to get out of, pronto.
Her reaction to that problem or situation is to formulate a PLAN, even if that plan is vague or even completely subconscious. But somewhere in there, there is a plan, and storytelling is usually easier if you have the hero/ine or someone else (maybe you, the author) state that plan clearly, so the audience or reader knows exactly what the expectation is.
When in JAWS, Sheriff Brody is confronted with the problem of a great white shark eating people in his backyard (ocean), his initial PLAN is to close the beach to swimmers. He throws together some handmade “Beaches Closed” signs and sticks them in the sand. Problem solved, right?
If that initial plan had actually worked, JAWS wouldn’t have made a hundred zillion dollars worldwide, not to mention cinematic history. The whole point of drama (including comedy) is that the hero/ine’s plan is constantly being thwarted: by the main antagonist, by any number of secondary and tertiary opponents, by the love interest, by the weather, or by the hero/ine him or herself (because you know we’re all our own worst enemies.).
So almost always, the initial plan fails. Or if it seems to succeed, it’s only to trick us for a moment before we realize how wretchedly the plan has failed. That weak initial effort is because it’s human nature to expend the least effort possible to get what we want, and only take greater and more desperate measures if we are forced to.
Now, in JAWS, the primary antagonist is the shark. The shark’s PLAN is to eat. Not just people, but whatever. (Interestingly, that plan seems to evolve…)
Brody’s initial plan of closing the beaches might actually have solved his problem with the shark, because without a steady supply of food, the beast probably would have moved on to another beach with a better food supply.
But Brody’s initial plan brings out a secondary antagonist: the town fathers, led by the mayor (and with a nice performance by co-screenwriter Carl Gottleib). They don’t want the beaches closed, because the summer months, particularly the fourth of July weekend, represents 70 percent of the town’s yearly income. So the town fathers obliquely threaten new sheriff Brody with the loss of his job if he closes the beaches, and Brody capitulates.
This proves disastrous and tragic, as the very next day (as Brody watches the water from the beach, as if that’s going to prevent a shark attack) another swimmer, a little boy, is killed by the shark, practicing its plan.
The town fathers hold a town meeting and decide on a new plan: they will close the beaches for 24 hours. Brody disagrees, but is overruled. Eccentric captain Quint offers his services to kill the shark – for 10 grand. The town fathers are unwilling to pay.
In response, Brody develops a new plan, one we see often in stories: he contacts an expert from afar, oceanographer Matt Hooper, a shark specialist, to come in and give expert advice.
Meanwhile a new antagonist, the mother of the slain little boy, announces a plan of her own: she offers a bounty for any fisherman who kills the shark who killed her son.
The bounty brings on a regatta of fishermen from up and down the eastern seaboard. One of these crews captures a tiger shark, which the mayor is quick to declare the killer shark. Case closed, problem solved, and the beaches can be reopened. Hooper is adamant that the shark is far too little to have caused the damage done to the first victim, and wants to cut the shark open. The mayor refuses, and is equally adamant that there is no more need for Hooper. We see Brody agrees with Hooper, but wants to believe that the nightmare is over. However, when the dead boy’s mother slaps Brody and accuses him of causing her son’s death (by not closing the beaches), Brody agrees to investigate further with Hooper, and they cut the shark open themselves to check for body parts. Of course, it’s the wrong shark.
Brody’s revised plan is to talk the Mayor into closing the beaches, but the Mayor refuses again, and goes on with his plan to reopen the beaches (and highly publicize the capture of the “killer” shark).
The beaches reopen for 4th of July and the town fathers’ failsafe plan is to post the Coast Guard out in the ocean to watch, just in case. While everyone is distracted by a false shark scare, the real shark glides into a supposedly secure cove where Brody’s own son is swimming, and kills a man and nearly kills Brody’s son. (And it’s so diabolical in timing that it almost seems the shark has a new plan of its own – to taunt Brody).
At that point the Mayor’s plan changes – he writes a check for Quint and gives it to Brody, to hire the captain to kill the shark. But that’s not enough for Brody, now. He needs to go out on the boat with Quint and Hooper himself, despite his fear of the water, to make sure this shark gets dead.
This happens at the story’s MIDPOINT, and it’s a radical revamp of Brody’s initial plan (which always included avoiding going in the water himself, at all cost). And it’s very often the case that at the midpoint of a story, the initial PLAN is completely shattered (a great example is in THE UNTOUCHABLES, which I’ve talked about here:
And yet, Brody is still not ultimately committed. For the next half of the second act, he allows first Quint and then Hooper to take the lead on the shark hunt. Quint’s plan is to shoot harpoons connected to floating barrels into the shark and force it to the surface, where they can harpoon it to death. But the shark proves far stronger than anyone expected, and keeps submerging, even with barrel after barrel attached to its hide.
And now a truly interesting thing happens. The shark, supposedly a dumb beast, starts to do crafty things like hide under the boat so the men think they’ve lost it. It seems to have a new, intelligent plan of its own. And when the men’s defenses are down, the shark suddenly batters into the ship and breaks a hole in the hull, causing the boat to take on alarming quantities of water, and making the men vulnerable to attack.
Brody’s plan at that point is to radio for help and get the hell off the boat. But in the midst of the chaos Quint suddenly turns into an opponent himself by smashing the radio – he intends to kill this shark.
Hooper takes over now and proposes a new plan: he wants to go down in a shark cage to fire a poison gun at the shark. But the shark attacks the cage, and then as the boat continues to sink, the shark leaps half onto the deck and eats Quint.
Brody is now on his own against the shark, and in one last, desperate Hail Mary plan (the most exciting kind in a climax), he shoves an oxygen tank into the shark’s jaws and then fires at the shark until the tank explodes, and the shark goes up in bloody bits. As almost always, it is only that last ditch plan, in which the hero/ine faces the antagonist completely on his or her own, that saves the day.
I hope this little exercise gives you an idea of how it can be really enlightening and useful to focus on and track just the plans of all the main characters in a story and how they clash and conflict. If you find your own plot sagging, especially in that long middle section, try identifying and tracking the various plans of your characters. It might be just what you need to pull your story into new and much more exciting alignment.
And of course the question is: any favorite examples of plans for me, today?
I am thrilled to announce that the The Harrowing finally gets its U.K. release this Thursday, September 17, with this fab new cover, one of my favorites – I guess I mean favourites – ever:
“Absolutely gripping…It is easy to imagine this as a film…Once started, you won’t want to stop reading.”
– The London Times
Congrats on the UK release, Alex! I love the cover also. Wow, it is fabulous.
Thanks for an awesome post, too. Once again you have educated and entertained me. Thank you. As for examples, I’m not properly caffeinated right now, so my brain is a tad slow in conjuring up examples. But, I would say Indiana Jones – Raiders of the Lost Ark. Still one of my all time favorites (novel and movie) and I love how the plans get more elaborate every time he is thwarted – and he has to confront his phobia of snakes. Thinking about it now, Raiders is very Jaws like in regards to plans and phobias.
Oh, I just checked directors and writers on IMDB. Low and behold they were both directed by Speilberg. I guess that proves my theory. 🙂
Great post, and congrats!
My all time favorite plan is: "Take the Ring to Mount Doom and throw it in the fire".
Favorite example of plans gone wrong: Shakespeare’s "Scottish Play."
It looks in the beginning like Macbeth has a foolproof plan: Kill the King, frame the servants, take over. But then he changes the plan to add the killing of Banquo and his son. Then he has to try and kill MacDuff. Before long, he’s at war with most of Scotland. And eventually, you figure out: it’s not Macbeth doing the planning, it’s the witches, and the plan is to destroy Macbeth.
Thank you for the great blog post.
I love the cover for The Harrowing.
All the best,
Alli, thanks, and yeah, RAIDERS would be a great one to track for plans.
Rae, that made me laugh out loud. That is a MOST excellent plan. And that’s a great example because good plans just SOUND mythic, don’t they?
Another excellent example, Dusty. You would think when the bodies start piling up, a protagonist would figure out the plan left something to be desired, but no…
Glad you liked it, RK. Yes, I can’t get over how much I love this cover.
First: Congrats on the UK release, the gorgeous cover and the GREAT blurb from the London Times. Wow.
Second: What a wonderful post. I love how this is framed — really easy to grasp and remember (especially for older minds like mine). Thank you.
Someone who played with plans in a superb was Donald Westlake. I think that’s what absolutely makes his Dortmunder books work so well. We readers get to see the plans and then see them fail and be reformed and fail again.
GET SHORTY is another book/movie with obvious plans that backfire and go in a million different directions and that’s part of the fun because we, the audience, aren’t ever quite sure what the main plan is. It keeps shifting and that’s the fun of it.
Great new cover, Alex.
And after reading this, I clearly need more characters and more plans.
Fantastic breakdown, as always, Alex! And congrats on the UK release, that’s beautiful!
Now I must go thwart a plan…
Love the cover, Alex! Congratulations on the UK release.
Also, love this post. It actually ties back into Rob’s post about plotting vs. pantzing… I probably don’t plot as much as most people, but I do figure out the plans. What they all want and how they think they’re going to get it, then what they’d do next if that went wrong.
(In the first Bobbie Faye book, it’s a simple plan: get the stupid tiara that the kidnappers want, give it to them, save her brother.)
Bourne Supremacy: Survive and try to remember who he is so he’ll know why the bad guys are chasing him.
Romancing the Stone: Bring the kidnappers the map, save her sister.
Die Hard: outwit the kidnappers.
[hmm, I seem to have kidnapping themes. Weird.]
Another great post here, Alex. Always a learning experience reading these posts.
And love the UK cover. I may just have to order it from Amazon UK.
Amazing to me. All it took was one word — "plan" — to completely explain how stories work. Excellent.
This is nice article.You have concerned very nice stuff about ‘the plan’.The book is fun to read.
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