L.A. MIX PROFILE: Newspaper Writer Patricia McFall


I was waiting for newspaper features writer Mcfall_p Patricia McFall in a Japanese restaurant in Pasadena, California. I was scheduled to be interviewed for an article in my hometown newspaper, the Pasadena Star-News. Through the window I saw a PT Cruiser park alongside the curb. Cool car–first sign that this would be a good interview. Out emerged a tall redhead. She rushed into the restaurant, sat down with me, and the conversation began.

As my blogmate Pari Noskin Taichert wrote last month, many interviewers don’t even read the books of their subjects, but that was not the case with Patricia. Insightful questions and then when the story finally came out in the tabloid U-Section of the San Gabriel Newspapers (Pasadena Star-News, San Gabriel Tribune, and Whittier Daily News), I was so impressed with how well the article was written. And if that wasn’t enough, a few months later the Long Beach Press-Telegram picked up Patricia’s story for Asian Pacific American Heritage Month in May 2005, making it the cover story for the U-Section and even placing a teaser above the masthead on the front page. What more could a fledgling author even dream of?

While many of us are familiar with the reviewers and writers for larger metropolitan newspapers, I thought it would be helpful to profile a writer for suburban newspapers in Southern California. (For more information regarding the holdings of the parent company, Media News Group, Inc., see this website.) Without further ado, here is Patricia McFall.

How would you describe yourself professionally? Freelancer? Stringer? Writing coach? All of the above? How many publications do you write for and can you describe the "U Section"–how many newspapers share content for that?

I’m a freelance writer and editor. I also teach fiction and coach writers privately. I’ve published one suspense novel, a half-dozen short stories of which three are mystery, and many non-fiction features, book reviews, and a regular style column. I’ve also been editing an online academic journal for the California State University system. Formerly, I ran the Programs for Writers at Cal State Fullerton extension for three years, where it was so much fun to set up classes taught by mystery stars like Elizabeth George and T. Jefferson Parker.

For three years, I wrote regularly for the lifestyle sections of the San Gabriel Valley Newspaper Group, which includes three dailies: the Pasadena Star-News, the Whittier Daily News, and the San Gabriel Valley Tribune. That group is in turn part of the larger Los Angeles Newspaper Group, which has other papers in the San Fernando Valley (Los Angeles Daily News) Long Beach (Press-Telegram) and three in the Inland Empire. Some of those occasionally pick up my pieces. I’ve eased off some of the newspaper work recently to have more time to write fiction, but I’m still involved in reviewing books and profiling local authors.

How many author profiles/book reviews do you estimate that you do a year? And how many of those are related to mysteries?

Of those, a dozen were about authors, but only one was on a mystery writer and one mystery-related—if you call Anne Rice that. She was a great interview, and author profiles are among my favorites because writers are almost always articulate, smart, and interesting.

I’ve also reviewed half a dozen mystery or suspense novels and a non-fiction book by a mystery author.

Describe your involvement with the mystery genre. I believe that you participated in some mystery conventions in the past. Which ones?

I attended Bouchercon and Left Coast Crime in the ‘90s, where I enjoyed being on and going to panels, and I did a presentation on Dashiell Hammett, where I got to interview Joe Gores and William Nolan. Conventions offer writers such a wonderful chance to connect with other writers, since we’re all readers and fans too. I remember stalking Ross Thomas and, realizing that he was about to leave the convention, running up to him to get his signature on my MWA card because I didn’t have any of his books on me. On an airport shuttle bus, I told Lawrence Block I knew who he was. He grinned and replied, "More than I can say most days." Wonderful and funny.

I’m lucky to count some terrific mystery/suspense authors as friends, including Barbara Seranella, Taylor Smith, and the late Patricia Guiver, who was my first student to be published. I never would have met any of them had I not been in the mystery world.

Conventions also offer the chance to learn a lot about publishing and to make good contacts, though I don’t advise a frontal-attack pitch to agents or editors trying to enjoy a quiet cup of coffee alone. Get business cards and use them, that kind of thing.

The workshops related to writers’ conventions—not just mystery gatherings—can be very worthwhile, and I’ve enjoyed teaching short-term classes for some of them.

How do you get ideas for your reviews/columns? Does your editor assign them to you? Do you want ARCs/galleys sent directly to you? If so, where should authors send them?

My editor used to be a student in my mystery-writing class, so it’s been a wonderful role reversal and collaboration since I wasn’t trained in journalism. She’s a great mentor and spoiled me rotten, letting me cherry-pick assignments. Most of my style topics were my own suggestions—like how to get a bra that fits, or how to spot quality workmanship in ready-to-wear clothes. Others were seasonal, but she usually let me put my consumerist spin on, say, the wedding dress industry or movie stars’ unfortunate fashion choices.

I usually get review copies of books from my editor, very seldom galleys, but I’d love to see new mysteries from legitimate publishers. I’m pretty finicky and am not very interested in e-books or self-published/POD books. Maybe I’ve read too many unpublished manuscripts in my time, including for my old agent. Meaning no disrespect, but in an earlier era, many self-published books would either have been rewritten or remained in a drawer. Of course, there are notable exceptions, as in the case of African American authors who self-published fantastic books because big publishers were ignoring them. I’m sure that agents and publishers can be blind to other stunning new talent, so please don’t send me hate mail for having that opinion!

For my purposes, an author has to live in Southern California, preferably in the San Gabriel Valley, for me to do a profile or review. Anyone wanting to send me a book, please email me first at offthecuff@surfside.net.

What tips would you suggest for authors who want to explore getting placement in the San Gabriel Newspapers/Long Beach Press-Telegram, etc.?

If you think reviewers are busy, wait until you meet a features editor! I’d say a good old press release is the most appropriate way to make contact. Be sure to approach a paper where you live or where your books are set, as a local angle is essential. It’s best not to bother an editor otherwise. I expect some people prefer paper releases and some electronic, so you could do worse than to send both. Newspaper websites often have a staff directory so you can send it to a specific person.

Have you won any awards for writing? If so, which ones?

Well, sort of. I never entered any contests, and my fiction portfolio is pitifully thin. However, my novel, NIGHT BUTTERFLY, was chosen by the L.A. Times as a year’s best-ten crime novel, and my piece on the history of velvet has been nominated for a best-column newspaper award. The Boston Globe said my first short story was worth the price of the paperback anthology it appeared in; does that count?

Thank you, Patricia! Patricia said that she’ll be checking in a few times today, so if you have a question or comment, fire away. She might have an answer for you.

Now who will be the subject of next month’s profile? You’ll just have to tune in and see.


Spend even a couple of hours in a store with any Japanese female from junior high age to young adulthood and you’ll undoubtedly hear the screech, "ka-WA-eeeeeee." Kawaii means cute. Just think Hello Kitty, Kero-kero-pi, etc., and you get the picture. There’s a lot of theories of why kawaii prevails in Japan.

I myself don’t have a natural affinity Furenjieitai for cuteness, but it’s surprising how easily you can get indoctrinated into the kawaii culture while living in Japan.

Even the military gets a kawaii makeover with this billboard for the Self-Defense Forces. (Photo courtesy of The Hokkaido Crow.)

11 thoughts on “L.A. MIX PROFILE: Newspaper Writer Patricia McFall

  1. Sue Trowbridge

    Those into kawaii have to check out the web site Cute Overload – cuteoverload.comThe site owner often features Japanese photos & videos. This morning, she posted the most adorable video clip from a Japanese TV show about a family of kittens. That site is always a great morning pick-me-up!

  2. Naomi

    Ai-ya! You weren’t kidding, Sue. Cute overload, cute overload. I’m shorting out.

    Actually I had just read that the Cute Overload blog was among the Top 100 blogs in the world.

    Maybe Murderati needs more kawaii-ness. What do you think?

  3. Pari

    Naomi and Patricia,Thanks for the great interview.

    One of the things that authors frequently forget is that local papers are interesting in local angles. Their readers are local and want to know about people in their own communities.

    This can be frustrating for someone like me who comes from New Mexico — with it’s tiny population and lousy literacy rate. But, even outsiders can sometime score in the local papers by finding a local tie-in — a bookstore signing, a connection to something local.

    Along those lines . . . um, well . . . Patricia, does adoring Naomi Hirahara count?

    Again, thank you.

  4. JT Ellison

    Another great one, Naomi.Patricia, I have a question. How do you think the blogs can work in new writers favor when trying to get the attention of a reviewer/ writer like you? Does an internet presence help get your attention?Thanks in advance!

  5. Patricia McFall

    To the person who asked about blogs:

    I use the Web for research, quick information and contacts, not searching to discover new talent (maybe I should).

    There may be some younger editors at publishers trend-spotting by looking at blogs. I don’t read them because so much unedited text makes me start with the blue pencil, and that can really screw up your monitor. ;o)

  6. Patricia McFall

    The local angle doesn’t have to be the book itself; I profiled a number of authors at a local book fair, for example. The more you’re out there, the more you maximize your exposure.

  7. Naomi

    Thanks again to Patricia. Really interesting comment about reading blogs with a blue copyediting pen! Maybe we all need Deni’s editing services.

  8. Beatrice Brooks

    Funny…I don’t feel a desire to edit a blog, or blogs, while I can barely get through a whole novel without my mind clicking: “Edit! Edit! Edit!”

    Maybe it’s because I consider blogs “the graffiti of the internet” (and yes, I just made that up, how’d you know? LOL) and I never feel any desire to edit graffiti.

    In a sense, editing graffiti would be like editing comic books.

    Actually, I do edit on the screen because I edit manuscripts electronically – using track changes.

    Which means the days of my blue pencil are gone. My edits usually show up in red.

    Oui, Pari? 🙂

    Hugs,Deni Dietz

  9. Patricia McFall

    Yes, it’s a special disorder that leads me (mentally) to edit every piece of text I see. Used to be so bad when I was teaching college students that I had to put my pen across the room to resist the urge to fix all but egregious errors.

    I also edit on Word, though I sometimes make a hard copy to check first when it’s complicated. Perfectionist tendencies, especially when they change my meds. ;o)

    Thanks for the opportunity to talk!

  10. Elaine

    I’ve been gone all day (I took a day off-can you belive it?)-thus I am late to the party today.

    Great interview, Naomi! And how nice to meet you Patricia…just keep your blue pencil away from my interviews at On The Bubble! Informality is the rule-a pox on grammar! The grin sign goes here.Seriously, it was very informative and so nice to have you here.

  11. Naomi

    I’m glad you all were able to “virtually” meet Patricia.

    Part of my mission in terms of this blog is to shine light on talented book folks behind the scenes. Many of these people don’t have websites, etc., but they are integral in supporting what we authors do.

    Mucho, mucho gracias.


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